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高中英语短文改错，共十处错误，求指出&
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第一行，if和in去掉第二行，notices改成noticed第三行，any改成some，最后的the改成a第四行，great改成greatly，after改成before第五行，Sometime改成sometimes，the改成what第六行，and改成but
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英文短文改错（共有十处错误）My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many touristscame visit it every day.They took photo；they wrote down their names on the walls；they were brought food and drink and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.
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My hometown there used to be a temple with a history of over eight hundreds years.It lies(修改laid) in a valley with green hills around it.It was such beautiful and famous that many touristscame visit it every day.They took photo（修改为：photoes)；they wrote down their names on the walls；they （were删除） brought food and drink（修改为drank） and left rubbish everywhere One day some tourists did a fire to cook food near the temple.All of（加a) sudden,a strong wind blew .The wooden temple caught fire .Soon the wholly(修改为whole) temple was burned out and only a little walls remained .The beautiful temple disappeared.
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