一篇英语短文改错求大神指导..共十处错误.At the age of seventeen,I left home to do part-time jobs,that made me understand "East or west,home is the best" better.At that time I thought of staying at home was bored because my parents were always telling me what to do but what not to.So when the chance came ,I left home and washed dishes at a restaurant .Things were not such easy for me.My hands become frozen because of cold.Beside ,some customers was quite particular They always scolded me.I felt they had dropped from heaven.When I talked my parents on the phone,tears rolled down my cheeks .Since then I had realized that home is my shelter and parents are great
　　.At the age of seventeen,I left home to do part-time jobs and that made me understand it better that "East or west,home is the best" .At that time I thought that my staying at home was boring because my parents were always telling me what was right to do.So I took the chance to leave home and washed dishes at a restaurant .Things were not so easy for me that My hands became frozen because of cold weather.Besides,some customers were fuss makers that they always scolded me.I felt they had led a life like heaven .When I talked to my parents on phone,tears rolled down my cheeks.Since then I have realized that home is the harbor of my soul and parents are very great.
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I’m writing to answer your ad publishing in “Panorama”. I devote myself to environmental protection and I am considering joining in your club. I would appreciate if you could give me some information. First, I would like to know how often meetings are held and where they take the place. I would also like to know whether the talks were given by experts in the field or by member of your organization. In addition, I would be grateful if you could tell me whether it is an extra charge for materials.
Beside, please tell me if there is a reduced membership fee for we students. Finally, I hope you can organize activities suitably for senior high students. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
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完全没有。我是自己认真做的。
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