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  【托福福作文185篇真题范文专项练习】  Topic29:有人认为人类活动是环境变坏,对此你怎么认为?  Topic29 Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[托福参看范文之一]Topic: 29  People have been living on the Earth for thousands of years. Human activity influences the Earth. Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. In my opinion, the earth is being damaged by human activity. There are many statements supporting my opinion.   Human activity has damaged natural environment and almost exausted natural resources. Modern industry needs more and more resources, including minerals, fuels and water. So we confront of the serious problems such as the lack of fuels and water. Ecological balance is damaged because factories occupy many places where animals and plants live. More and more buildings are constructed and forests become less and less. If we cannot recognize these problems and solve them soon, we would finally lose the environment suitable for our living.  An other serious problem is "the green-house effect." Human activity decreases forests and increases the usage of fuels so that the gas of carbon dioxide is output more and more and there are not enough plants to absorb it. The green-house effect is more obvious and more sensible these years. Due to the effect, icebergs in the south polar and north polar melt and the sea level becomes higher than before. I am worried about the cities nearby the sea and hope scientists find an effective method to eliminate the green-house effect.  Although we have advanced machines and our life seems more comfortable than before, we have less chances to approach natures and less spaces to act. The cities become bigger and if we want to have a picnic with our friends, we have to drive a long distance to find a natural place. In fact, the spaces of human activity are being damaged by the skyscrapers and factories.  From the above statements, we can conclude that human activity brings the Earth many damages. Fortunately people have recognized the point and I believe that the Earth will become a better place to live with our ceaseless efforts.[托福参看范文之二]  Nowadays our Earth faces a number of serious problems, such as the environment pollution, the increasing population, the fatal effects of nuclear weapons, and so on. So some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. But as far as I am concerned that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live and also makes some negative effects in this process. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.  Even though we face so many crisis, no one can deny that Earth are more suitable for human habitation. That is the result of the efforts of generations of people. If without that, we might also live in caves and eat the crude food just like wild animals. If that is true, we must haven’t time and energy to think over the problems of the Earth because we have to look for food and avoid becoming the food of other animals. At that state, whether the Earth were harmed is not important for human because some certain crisises can annihilate the total population, such as some infectious disease or the a change of climates.  It is inevitable to produce some positive aspect functions when human are struggle to improve the survive abilities and from the experiences of history we also have make great effort to resolve this kinds of problems. For example, most of people hope to limit the scope of nuclear weapons and the protection of environment is accept by almost every one. Most of problems are controlled by ourselves and some of them have the hope to be resolved in years. We are finding the balance between the development and the protection of our Earth. So it is unnecessary to deny the advancement of human.&  For the reasons presented above, we admit that there are some problems in the process of the human development, but those problems are resolving and as a whole we make the Earth a better place to live. Human evolved in the mode of continuing to correct their mistakes and making a better progress.1&&&
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托福满分作文的三大写作技巧
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  导语:托福考试中,托福写作是最考核考生英语水平及能力的部分。在托福写作部分拿下高分已然不易,写一篇托福满分着实不易。但是,考生掌握了扎实的基础,在辅以一定的写作技巧,托福满分作文也触手可得。要在托福写作中拿到满分,考生老老实实的拿基础去拼是不行的。对于基础较好的考生来说,此时,技巧才是利剑。那么,如何写一篇托福满分作文呢?下面和小编一起来看看吧!
  1、压缩审题时间
  对于写作部分,一般考生都会花个好几分钟来仔细审题,做个构思。但是,托福考试的独立写作,实际上相当于是开卷考试了。首先题库公开,它的题型和题材都不会超出题库的范围,考生可以在题库中找到类似的题目,加之机经的强大力量,使得托福独立写作真的成了开卷考试。既然是开卷考试,那么考生在平时的备考中,就应练一练各类型的写作题,使自己对任何一种考试话题都很熟悉,这样在考试过程中,考生就能压缩一下审题时间,尽量在1分钟内完成。那些完成不熟悉的话题,一下子考生是很难写出满分的作文的。满分不是临场发挥出来的,而是准备出来的,机会总是留给有准备的人。
  2、提炼自己的模板
  考生平时会练习很多写作,从中提炼自己的写作模板,那么在真正考试中,作文不过是信手拈来。假设你的文章字数是500字,那么你大概要写50至60个句子。把这50至60个句子,排成编号,从第1个到第50个,也就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话,你都知道要写什么,并且知道怎么写,甚至每个句子你都掌握了2~3个漂亮的句式,这样你还担心自己拿不到高分吗?考生有一个自己的模板,能更迅速的在托福写作中完成一篇0瑕疵的作文。
  3、压缩题库
  托福写作的题库中,有185个题目,考生针对每一个题目准备一篇范文是不可能的。对此,考生可以压缩题库,将工作量缩小。压缩题库,考生可以通过将题目分类,对每一类题目一一思考,并动手写一写;或者将题库中可以互相转化的文章放弃,只通过一篇练习便可。简单来说,对每一类作文,考生都必须联系过,接触过,研究过,那么才能在考试中处变不惊。
  总之,一篇托福写作满分不是依靠机遇的,而是完全凭借考生充足的准备。扎实的基础加上充分的准备,那才配得上是满分作文的眷顾。
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