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everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. In fact. For some the desire is great than that of the average peopleWe all have a strong desire to succeed. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets
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everyone wants to be successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard work. Success is an attitude and has no realsecrets. In fact. becouse
some the desirestrong desire to success
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grea t改为greater
than说明要用比较级第二行:really 改为real really是副词 不能修饰名词 secret第四行第一行:so 改为but 两句话是转折的关系 第三行:start 改为strats 因为主语it是单数第三人称
For some the desire is great than that of the average 这里有个than可以看出是比较级，所以great改为greater
For some the desire is greater than
the average people. In fact,everyone wants to be successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.
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出门在外也不愁英语短文改错 急The weekend is coming!I will be so busy as a bee .On the Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is fishing,I will have a dance class.I like danceing because it gives myself a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for my grandma on sunday.I am look forward to that moment!I am surely we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out loud.Besides.a lot stars appear in it.
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更正在括号处标明,总共十处错误,保证答案准确率!The weekend is coming!I will be (so改成as) busy as a bee.On (去掉the) Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is (fishing改成finished),I will have a dance class.I like dancing because it gives (myself改成me) a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit (for改成to) my grandma on Sunday.I am (look改成looking) forward to that moment!I am (surely改成sure) we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite (programs改成program) (加入on) TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out loud.Besides,a lot (加入of) stars appear in it.如果对你有所帮助,敬请点击页面中的“选为满意回答”按钮,
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The weekend is coming! I will so busy as a bee .On Saturday morning,I have to rush my math class.After fishing,I will have a dance class.I like danceing because it gives
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“promise is debt，once you made a promise。only by this way can you make a true man which deserves people‘s respect。”that is，youjust keep it if you break your words。so i think it necessaryandimportant to think it twice after making apromiseandkeeping it once you‘ve made it whatever happens，you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith，you‘ll lose your friendsandeven fame。stillmoreworse短文改错it is no doubt that everyone makespromises allhislife。therefore，just as the proverb goes
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第一行his改为their第二行made改为make，more去掉第三行it后面加is第四行it去掉第五局which改成who
短文改错 It is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life。Therefore，just as the proverb goes，“promise is debt。”that is，once you have made a promise，you just have to keep it. If you break your words，you won‘t be a preson worth of good faith。Still worse，you‘ll lose your friends and even (credibility)fame。So I think it necessary and important to think it twice after making a promise and keeping it once you‘ve made it whatever happens。Only by this way can you make a true man which(who) deserves people‘s respect。
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(It改成There) is no doubt that everyone makes promises all his life. Therefore, just as the proverb goes, “promise is debt.” That is, once you (made改成make 或 在made前面加上have) a promise, you just keep it. If you break your (words改为word), you won‘t be a preson (worth改为worthy) of good faith. Still (去掉more) worse, you‘ll lose your friends and even fame. So I think it necessary and important to think it twice (after改为before) making a promise and (keeping改为keep) it once you‘ve made it whatever happens. Only (by改为in) this way can you make a true man (which改为who) deserves people‘s respect.
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1. which改成who2.unnecessary改成necessary
make 前面加to3.puzzling改成puzzled
greater 改成great4.ourselves改成us
Beside改成Besides5.what改成how 6.are改成is
said改成says
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