You said to me," I had thought it over before you asked."这句话的间接引语应该怎么变.had thought 已经是过去的过去 在变成间接引语的时候是不是就不需要发生变化了?为什么 before you asked的时态不需要变化？
这里不能再用过去的过去了,因为到过去完成时就没有再过去的时态了.You said to me that you had thought it over before I asked.
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I had thought it over before you asked.had thought 已经是过去的过去 在变成间接引语的时候是不需要发生变化的。
你只要记得直接引语变间接引语的规则就可以了（你问的是时态问题，所以我就只在这方面回答一下，希望能帮到你，有不对的请指出）：如果主句为过去时态，直接引语变间接引语时，间接引语的时态应该向前推一个时态，具体如下：
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第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，20小题，每小题3分，共60分）
第一节：阅读理解（共15小题； 每小题3分， 满分45分）&& &
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项中（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
Driving to the airport in the early morning, I felt
excited. Although I was heading abroad for my first time alone, I felt cheerful
and enthusiastic. I was spending the summer in Paris.
While looking for more interesting things to do
besides sleeping and eating, I found programs for learning languages abroad,
and jumped at the chance to study French in this city known for its art,
fashion, food, and culture. As I arrived at the airport where I would leave my
family, I still felt only great happiness. I excitedly made my way through
security, leaving my loved ones behind.
My connecting flight was in Frankfurt, Germany,
14hours from Denver. Sitting in a crowed plane watching bad movies couldn’t
dampen my excitement. When the woman next to me asked me where I was going, I
happily answered& and was pleased to note
a tone of jealousy in her response.
But when I arrived in Frankfurt, fear and anxiety
began to set in. Being in an enormous, busy building in a country where I
couldn’t speak the language was frighting, but as i found my way, I gained
confidence. When I boarded the second plane and discovered that the flight was
less than an hour, I was filled with excitement as I thought of how I would
manage in a country with a new language.
When I stepped on the ground of Pairs for the first
time, I was extremely happy and excited. I gathered my bags and joined the crow
of people waiting for friends and family. I quickly had my first experience
trying to communicate in a language that I had only practiced in school. As I
left the airport, I looked for familiar monuments I had read about, but the
landscape looked very ordinary.Then，with one sharp turn, the Eiffel Tower came into view,
and I was finally in Pairs.
of the following is True according to the passage?
the first time that the writer had traveled abroad.
new term the writer was to study French in Paris.
crowded plane made the writer less excited.
writer flew to Paris via another country.
can we learn from the passage?A.The writer was travelling with a woman friend of
her parents’.
B.Arriving in Paris, the writer saw some family
friends waiting for her.
C.The writer was not along when travelling to the
airport in Denver.
D.The writer had great difficulty communicating with
people in French.
23.What is the passage mainly about?
A.The writer’s excitement and happiness on her
journey to Paris.
B.The writer’s exciting experiences of studying
French in Paris.
C.The writer’s expectation for French art, fashion,
food and culture.
D.The writer’s excitement resulting from her first
ride on a plane
【细节题】 解析： 由文章第三段首句“My connecting flight was in Frankfurt, Germany, 14hours from Denver.”和第四段“But when I arrived in Frankfurt, fear and anxiety began to set in.When I boarded the second plane”可以看出作者去巴黎的途中要转换飞机的。
【细节题】解析：
由文中第二段最后一句“As I arrived at the airport where I would leave my family, I still felt only great happiness. I excitedly made my way through security, leaving my loved ones behind.”可知有家人送作者去机场。又由于“My connecting flight was in Frankfurt, Germany, 14hours from Denver.”可知Denver是作者出发的地方。
【主旨大意】解析： 纵观全文作者主要描述的是去往巴黎途中的兴奋和开心，文中多次出现excitement 和happiness的描述。
A group of foreign residents married to
Japanese talked about their children’s names.
Nicole Despres
Students services
manager, 40 (American)
We have no intention to live outside
Japan so it made sense for the kids to take my Japanese husband’s family name.
However, we did want to have a Western name too, so all three of them now have
both a Western and Japanese name. We agreed there would be no strange names,
spelling or unusual kanji(Chinese characters in the Japanese language). All
names had to be easy to say and familiar in both Japanese and English.
John McCracken
Company general
manager, 27(American)
My son’s name is Aiden. In part because
my wife and I met in university and as she was studying Irish history and I
have some links to Scotland and Ireland, I wanted a unique Gaelic(盖尔族的)name. We settled for
Aiden as we found kanji that can be used in Japan that means “legendary hero”
Paula Murakami
College women’s
Association of Japan, 53(American)
My husband was very excited about
choosing names, so I decided to let him choose. He wanted their first names to
be Japanese and camp up with names that included the kanji character in his own
name. Our boys, Hiroki and Kenta, never had any problems while living on the
U.S. West Coast with Japanese names, and I think both as children and as
adults, they love their names.
Recording engineer,42(Mexican)
My son’s name is Lenny. My wife chose it
together with me as we were looking for a name that works in both worlds — mine
in Mexico, and hers in Japan — and the name Lenny is common everywhere. In
Japanese we write the name in katakana as that is easy for Japanese
people who seem to like names in two or three characters.
24.What do we know about
the people mentioned in the passage?
A. Nicole and her husband had an
agreement on how to name the children.
B. Jeff will remain in Japan as his wife
is not used to Mexican life.
C. The four couples have decided to live
with the children in Japan forever.
D. Paula and her family would love to
live on the U.S. West Coast.
25.Which of the following
does the underlined word “katakana” mean?
A. A Japanese system of grammar.
B. A way of writing the Japanese
C. A Japanese word which means “name”.
D. A name popular with Japanese people.
26.What can we infer from
the passage?
A. Nicole and her Japanese husband have a
daughter and two sons.
B. Paula has little say in making a
decision at home.
C. John’s wife is Irish and the couple
have only one child.
D. Lenny is a name familiar to Japanese
when written the Japanese way.
27.Which would be the
best title for the passage?
A. Is a western name better than a
Japanese name?
B. Why does your child have two names?
C. How do you choose your child’s name?
D. Do you settle differences in naming
your child?
24.【细节题】答案： A。根据“Nicole Despres”段: We have no intention to live outside
Japan so it made sense for the kids to take my Japanese husband’s family
name. However, we did want to have a Western name too, so all three of them
now have both a Western and Japanese name. We agreed there would be... 可以得知,主语都是“we”说明夫妻俩就取名字这件事情持有一致的看法，答案选A。
25. 【词义猜测题】答案： B 。从 “Jeff Ruiz”段中：In Japanese we write the name in katakana as that is easy for Japanese people who seem to like names in two or three
characters. 可知，答案为B。
26.【推理题】答案： D。从“Jeff Ruiz”段中：and the name Lenny is common
everywhere. In Japanese we write the name in katakana as that is
easy for Japanese people who seem to like names in two or three characters.
可知，Jeff Ruiz和妻子选择了“ the name Lenny is common everywhere”一个世界各地都普遍使用的名字，那么写成日语后按理也应该是一个很普遍常用的名字，故答案为D。
27. 【主旨题】答案： C 结合第一段内容：A group of foreign residents married
to Japanese talked about their children’s names. 外国居民与日本人结婚后，给孩子取名的事情，并结合每段的内容，可知正确选项为C。
Washington: NASA has announced evidence that Jupiter's largest moon, Ganymede, has a saltwater ocean under its icy surface. The ocean seems to have more water than all the water on Earth's surface, according to new Hubble observation.
Hubble observations of Ganymede's magnetic field strongly suggest that the
moon, which is the largest in our whole solar system, is home to a subsurface
Scientists
estimate the ocean is 95 kilometres thick, which is about 10 times deeper than
Earth's oceans. But unlike our salty waters, Ganymede's ocean is buried under
150 kilometres of ice.
scientists have speculated(推测) since 1970s about the presence of an ocean on
Ganymede------the largest moon in our solar system------ until now the only
observational evidence came from a brief flyby by the Galileo spacecraft, which
didn’t observe the moon long enough to confirm a liquid ocean.
discovery marks an important milestone, highlighting what only Hubble can
accomplished. In its 25 years in orbit, Hubble has made many scientific
discoveries in our own solar system. A deep ocean under the icy surface of
Ganymede opens up further exciting possibilities for life beyond Earth.
Scientists
have already confirmed the existence of an ocean on Europa, another
moon orbiting Jupiter, and NASA has announced plans to send an unmanned mission
there searching for the life that might come with liquid water.Hubble is
a telescope that orbits Earth, but because of its impressive gravitational
analyses it can be used to study the inside of far distant planets. Using these
same principles, scientists could theoretically detect oceans on distant planets as well.
28. What can we learn about the
Ganymede from the passage?
A. It is a planet with the largest
moon in our whole solar system.&
B. Its ocean adds to people’s
excitement about life beyond Earth.&
C. It will be used by NASA as a base
for the Hubble telescope.&
D. Its liquid ocean was first proved
by the Galileo spacecraft.&
29. Which of the following best
describes the writer’s attitude towards Hubble?
A. Cautious&&&&&&&&&&&& B. Doubtful &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& C.
Negative&&&&&&&&&&& D. Favourable
30. What does the underlined part in
Paragraph 6 mean?
A. An underground ocean has been
found in Europe.
B. The presence of an underground
ocean in Europe is not possible.
C. It is now certain that there is an
ocean ion Europe.
D. No evidence has shown the
existence of an ocean on Europe.&
31. What type of writing does this
passage belong to?
A. A term essay&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& B. A news report
C. An experiment report&&&&&&&&&&&&&& D. An exploration review.
本文大意：在木星上发现海洋的存在。
28. B. 推理判断题。通过第五段中“A
deep ocean under the icy surface of Ganymede opens up further exciting
possibilities for life beyond Earth.”可知。
29. D. 推理判断题。通过第五段中“This
discovery marks an important milestone, highlighting what only Hubble can accomplished.”可知。
30. C. 句意猜测题。通过横线句子中的“confirm
the existence” 和”NASA has announced plans to send an unmanned mission there
searching for the life that might come with liquid water.”可知。
31. B. 推理判断题。通过第一段“Washington:
NASA has announced evidence…”格式及文章内容可知。
is dying before us yet we sit and watch. If the TV or the game system breaks,
we run off to the stores to get it fixed immediately no matter what the cost.
Why aren’t we willing to fix our earth? Are our televisions and game systems
more important to us than where we live? Where shall we continue to live, until
the end of time?
is our home and cannot be replaced. We must take care of it. We have come up
with so much technology that limits us instead of helping us. Take that game system
we run to repair. What does it do? It occupies kids’ time! The earth has
already given kids plenty of entertainment in the forms of fields and hills,
forests and plains, water and land. However, instead of using what the earth
has given us, and helping kids by giving them exercise as they run around, we
decide to ruin kids’ minds with game systems that glue them to the screen for
hours, and make them ignore their homework and chores. We have polluted this
earth by making these things which do not even help in any way!
already messed up this world, we have ruined the air, water, and animals that
it has so willingly provided for us. We need to stop this destruction of life
and bring back the world we had before. It will not be easy, but everybody can
help! What about something as simple as turning the lights off when you leave a
room? Recycling what can be recycled? Picking up litter? Donating money to an
environmental organization? None of these things are very hard. We can’t just
always say, “Oh, the earth is a mess. Ah, well, those big companies that are
polluting so much can stop and fix it.” Instead, we need to help out. It’s not
only it’s everyday things that we do too that are ruining
the earth. So stop and think about what you can do to make a difference to our
does the author mention televisions and game systems in Paragraph 1?
make people better aware of the urgency to the protection of the earth.
explore the great harm done to the earth by too much technology waste.
show the relationship between overuse of those things with early death.&
remind people to spend less on them and use the saved money in a wiser way.
can be inferred from the second paragraph that the author
we must take care of our irreplaceable home-----the earth
running around in fields occupies too much of kids’ time
an extremely negative attitude to things like game systems
it for granted that technology gives kids plenty of entertainment
can clearly feel that the author wrote this passage with deep_____
anger&&B. emotion &&&C. sadness&&&D. regret
is the main purpose of the passage?
criticize those big companies that ruin the earth
people to save kids from the harm done by pollution.
give kids plenty of entertainment in a clean environment
call on people to stop ruining the earth
本文大意：保护地球。
32. A. 推理判断题。通过文章主旨及第一段最后一句“Where shall we continue to live, until the end of time?”和第二段第一句“The earth is our home and cannot be replaced. We must take care of it.” 可知
33. C. 推理判断题。通过第二段中“It
occupies kids’ time!” 和“we decide to ruin kids’ minds with game systems that
glue them to the screen for hours, and make them ignore their homework and
chores. We have polluted this earth by making these things which do not even
help in any way!”可知。
34. B. 推理判断题。通过文章中作者的疑问句和感叹句可以得知。例如：Why aren’t we willing to fix our earth? Are our televisions and
game systems more important to us than where we live? It will not be easy,
but everybody can help!
35. D. 推理判断题。通过最后一段内容和最后一句“So
stop and think about what you can do to make a difference to our world!”可知。
第二节 七选五 （共5小题；每小题3分，满分15分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余项。
iPads vs. Textbooks
What if you could
have your whole backpack at the touch of your fingertips? In the first month of
the Apple iPads release, 25million were sold! People all over the world use
iPads for all sorts of different things, but one of their finest qualities is
the ability to be a textbook. ___36____
To begin with, iPad
are less expensive. Textbooks become outdated and schools have to buy new
books, but with an iPad schools can update them for free. __37___ Schools don’t
have to spend $500 every year for iPads because they last a while and can be
___38___ Students usually have multiple
classes, which results in multiple textbooks. Heavy backpacks filled with books
can cause back problem. A solution to that is an iPad , which only weighs 1.33
pounds and can hold all of a student’s textbooks.
Third, schools
should get rid of their textbooks and get iPads because they have more
capabilities. Some might think all of the apps are distracting , but the apps
actually make iPads more efficient. __39___ Textbooks cannot do those tasks,
but iPads can easily do them with just a tap of the fingertip.
Lastly, iPads are a
better choice for schools instead of textbooks because these devices allow
students to access their learning anywhere at any time. ___40_____ With iPads,
they find it easier to get their homework done.
In conclusion , schools should get rid of
their clumsy textbooks and switch to iPads. iPads have allowed this generation
to have their entire backpack in the palm of their hands.
tablets are perfect for busy students.
iPads cost less and are more popular.
C.Therefore,
they can use the saved money for other programs.
have already replaced textbooks in over 600 American counties.
E.Moreover,
in high school ,textbooks have an average of 4.8 pounds each.
have every reason to do away with their school books and switch to iPads.
absorb the need to buy calculators, dictionaries, and other items that are
found within the device.
解析：本文主要以电子产品ipad为话题，对比传统教科书的；说明了学校应该用ipad替代textbooks的原因。
36. 选F. 本段为主题段，总结下文的五段原因；是本文的主题句；do
away with their school books 表示抛弃传统教科书；switch to ipads 表示要用iPad
37.选C. 前句说iPad的优点是可以免费更新；37承接上句选项c中用saved
38.选E 此题容易错选成B; 但是，本段的主题是说iPad的重量轻，便于携带；
39.选G．根据39空前句的关键词apps，可以替换选项中的calculators
,dictionaries, and ……
40.选A. 根据逻辑关系，可知前后句表示并列；是说让学习变得更容易；
第三部分& 英语知识运用（共两节，满分55分）
第一节 完形填空（共20小题；每题2分，满分40分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A, B, C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
Uncle Bruce has been my most influential role model. I admire
him because he has 41& me into
the person I am today by teaching me about respect and responsibility and that
anything 42having takes a lot of hard work.
The most important thing he has 43 me is how to think.
He always says, “You can learn something from everyone, 44 it’s what not
to do.” He always does what he &45 .
If he says, “I’ll pick you up at seven on Thursday ,” it will 46 . Also,
Bruce is the kind of person who actually &47 you.
Uncle Bruce was in the army for 20 years and went through
some terrible &48 , but he hasn’t
let them affect him &49 . After
hearing his stories about alcohol- and drug-related 50 , I have no
interest in doing anything that could &51 me or my friends. He is also the only
person who truly believes I can &52 it
to West Point. He has done everything within his &53 to help me achieve that goal.
Uncle Bruce is my hero he is &54 that I want to be when I’m his age. He
is smart, financially &55 , and
gives back to his community. There is no way I can &56 him for all he’s done. He is the one
whose &57 can change the way I
look at something. I’ve never told him that I love him, 58 has he told
me, but we love each other and I wouldn’t have it any other way. I’m not& 59 he’s perfect, but I can’t imagine &60 without him how that he is here.
41. A. shaped &&&&&&
B. promoted& & && C. trained&&&&D.
42. A. like &&&&& && B. about&&& &&& C.
from&& &&&D. worth&
43. A. directed&&&&&&
B. taught&&&&&&C. encouraged &&D. improved
44. A. so that&&&&&&&B. even if&&&&&&C. as if&&&&
45. A. wants&&&&&&&&B. supports&&&&
&C. promises&&&D. advises
46. A. matter&&&&&&& B. insist&&&&&&C.
succeed& &&&D.
47. A. sticks to&&&&&&B. points at &&&&C. listens to&&&D.
48. A. experiences&&&&&B. diseases&&&&&C. drills&&& &D. adaptations
49. A. materially&&&&&B. negatively&&& &C.
barely &&&& D.
positively
50. A. tendencies& && &B. statistics &&& C. references& &&D. misfortunes
51. A. sink&&&&&&&&&B. test&&& &&&C.
harm&&& &&&D.
52. A. make&&&&&&&&&B. take&&&&&&&C.
&&D. seize
53. A. management&& &&& B.
access &&&&&C. patent&&&&&&D.
54. A. everybody&&&&&&B. everything &&&C. nobody && &&& D. nothing
55. A. secure&&&&&&& B. shaky &&&&&&C.
proper&& &&&&D.
56. A. praise&&&&&&& B. repay &&&&&&C.
present&&&&&&D. recharge
57. A. strength&&&& &&B.
honesty& && &C. opinion &&&&&&D.
58. A. or&&&&&&&&&&B. either&&&&
nor&&&&& &&
59. A. saying&&&&&&&&B. proving&&&&&C.
expressing&&& &D. demanding
60. A. travelling&& &&&B.
studying&&&&&C. working &&&&& D. living
41.A. 根据上下文意，他把我塑造成了现在的我，所以选项比较来看，只能选“shape”塑造。
42.D. 本空较难，分清句子成分是关键。“that anything 42having takes a lot of hard work”与前面的about短语共同做teach的宾语，此从句中 “anything having”做takes的主语，句意为“任何值得拥有的东西都要花费一番努力”，这里选用“值得worth doing”更好。
43.B. 根据文章第一段，Uncle Bruce一直在教我做人，这里是说“他所教给我最重要的事情是如何思考”，根据前文暗示，选用taught。
44.B. 结合上下文，选项中只有“即使”更符合文意即：即使它没什么关系。
45.C. 根据下一句暗示，此句理解为“言出必行”，所以选项中“promise，承诺”更合适。
46.D.本空较难，关键看清代词。结合文章上下文，“matter是事关紧要”，“insist是坚持要求或坚持认为的意思”，“succeed是成功”“happen”是“发生”的意思，此空前面it指代uncle承诺过的事，结合前文“言出必行”，所以根据文章happen更合适。本空易选错insist，如果选insist，需要将前面的it改为he。
47.C. 本空较难，根据文章基调，作者在全文透露出Uncle Bruce在各个方面都很好，对自己的影响也很大，此句中又有also，可以推测本句也是在夸uncle，四个选项中只有“listen to倾听”是褒义，故选C。
48.A. 名词词义辨析，该句讲的是经历，所以experiences是更恰当。
49.B. 根据下文的连词but转折后，说明下句的意思相反，所以选“negatively消极地”。
50.D. 前文的terrible experiences和alcohol- and drug-related都暗示了，这是uncle所遇到的不幸的故事，所以选择D。
51.C. 文章中“我对做任何伤害我及我的朋友的事情不敢兴趣”所以选“harm伤害”
52.A. 根据文章句意即上下文，“他是唯一一个相信我能够成功到达West Point的人”且make it 可以表示“成功做成某事”
53.D. 结合上下文及常用表达“在他能力范围之内”所以选择“power力量”更合适
54.B. 本空较难，本句译为“他是我想成为的一切（我想成为跟他一样的人）”，侧重我想成为uncle那样具有一切良好品质的人，而不是我成为别人，所以选B而非A。
55.A. 根据下文“他回报社区”因此判断他经济上是有保障的，所以选A
56.B. 结合全文来看，作者对Bruce很感激，所以这里是在表达“回报”之意
57.C.此空较难，容易误选strength“力气，长处”，从上下文来看，既然uncle在用他的良好习惯和品质影响着我，想必他的观点也会影响我对事物的看法，这里应选“opinion意见”。
58.C. 上文中“never”表否定，因此下文应用“neither”来搭配使用。
59.A. 根据文意“我不是说他很完美”。
60.D. 结合上下文“无法想象没有他的生活”所以选择“living”。
第二节& 语法填空& （共10小题；每题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下列材料，在空白处填上适当的内容或括号内单词的正确形式（1个单词）。
What should you do
if you are not able to sleep? The best thing is to try to avoid bad habits. 61&&& &you always go to bad and get up at about the
same time, this sets a 62&&& (health)
rhythm in your life. Don't drink caffeine drinks in the evening. Smoking and
alcohol can also keep you awake. You may have trouble 63&&&& &(sleep) if you have a heavy meal just before
you go to bed.
You may also find it
difficult 64&&&&& &(get) to sleep if you have a problem or
something else on your mind. This is 65&&&& &you need to relax. As you lie
in bed, tense the muscles in your feet and then relax 66&&&& . Continue up the body, tensing and
relaxing the muscles until you reach the head. Start with the feet again if you
are still tense. If you 67&&&& &(think) about a problem or about something
exciting that is going to happen the next day, get up and write about it. That
will help to take it off your mind. You can also get up and read, but be sure
to choose 68&&&& &book that is not too difficult.69&&& , you may get so interested that you
won’t want to go to sleep even when you feel sleepy.&
Sleep well! Sweet 70&&& &(dream)!
61. If 考查状语从句，只有if的意思符合。
62. healthy 考查形容词，此处应填形容词，healthy是health的形容词形式。
63. sleeping 考查非谓语，have trouble in doing sth,
可以省略in。
64. to get 考查非谓语，it是形式主语，to get to sleep是真正主语。
65. when 考查名词性从句，只有when符合意思和语法。
66. them 考查代词，them指代the muscles。
67. are thinking 考查谓语，此处需要进行时表示“一直或正在考虑”。
68. a 考查冠词，此处泛指一本不太难的书。
69. Otherwise 考查副词，此处意思为“否则”。
70. dreams 考查名词，此处意思为“做个好梦”，复数名词泛指。
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作
文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
my friends are a special one I’m most thankful to. I got to know him when I
started with school. He has been with me ever since. Though he looks seriously,
he is really fun as you get close him. He is quiet or knowledgeable. He knows
every language in the world, all the event in history and the thoughts of great
scientists.
My friend is patience. I am slow in
understanding, but I can turn to him whenever I have a question. When I am
tired, he makes me relaxing. When I am lonely, he stayed with me silently. When
I am sad, he cheers me up. Shall I tell you where he is? His name is “READING”.
第一处：are 改为is& 考察主谓一致
第二处：去掉with
第三处：seriously 改为 serious& 考察系动词后用形容词做表语
第四处：close 后加to&
第五处：or 改为 and
第六处：event 改为events& 考察名词单复数
第七处：patience 改为 patient&& 考察形容词做表语
第八处：relaxing 改为relaxed& 考察形容词的-ed和-ing 形式
第九处：stayed 改为stays& 考察动词时态，此处应该用一般现在时
第十处： where 改为who& 考察宾语从句，从句意理解应该用who
第二节& 书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是张志强，是东华中学学生会主席。今年暑假学校有些老师和学生要去伦敦附近著名的Harrow School进行为期四周的学习和旅游。请根据下面表格的内容给Harrow
School的史密斯先生写封信，请他为你们做好安排。
共25人，男11人，女11人，另有两名女教师。
上午上英语课，下午在伦敦市内游览或参加一些体育活动；星期六、星期天参观其他城市。
住在当地英国人家，以便了解英国人的生活并提高口语能力。
注意：1.包括所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯、完整；
2.词数：100左右；
3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
&&&&&&&& I am Zhang
Zhiqiang, chairman of the student union of Donghua Middle School. In this
coming summer vacation, some teachers and students of our school will make a
four-week visit to your school near London, both for
English learning and traveling. Having been informed that you are the person in charge of
this trip, I am writing to provide you with more detailed information.
First of all,
there are 25 people in all, including 12 male and 11 female students and 2
female teachers. Besides, the activities have been arranged in advance. During weekdays, all the members will have English class in the morning, while in
the afternoon,we intend to make a trip in London or participate in some sports
activities. At weekends, a trip to other cities near London is on the
schedule. The last but not the least, with regards to
the accommodation, we expect to stay at the local families, for the sake of having a better understanding of the
British life and meanwhile, promoting our oral English.
above are all the information deserving your attention. We
are looking forward to visiting Harrow School.
Thank you in advance.&&Thank you in advance.
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