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如何让自己的驾校信息排名靠前？
如何让自己的驾校信息排名靠前？
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杭州联桥网络科技有限公司 浙ICP备号英语短文纠错,看一下有没有什么表达不地道或语法错误,帮我改一下,理由要详细有The most important body partMay I ask you a question?What is the most important body part in your mind?Maybe you will say heart or something else,but the correct answer is shoulder.A wide shoulder which your friends or relatives can cry on .when they are sad or disappointed,you will give the shoulder that they need…David’s mother,a kind housewife,one day,she asked her son what the most important body part was in his mind.Her son said heart at once,she smiled and said nothing.Over the years,she asked her son a couple more times,however,each time she said the same answer,“you are wrong,but you are getting smarter.”When David’s grandpa died,the entire family member cried,also,tears welled in the eyes of David’s mother.Suddenly she asked her son the special question,David was shocked,and confused.He didn’t know why his mother asked this question again and again.He summoned the courage to ask her mother and knew the answer…The most important part was shoulder,everyone needs[这里是用needed呢,还是用needs呢] a shoulder to cry sometimes,his mother hoped her son would have enough love and shoulders when he needed…The most important body part is not a selfish one,it is sympathetic to the pain of others…请大家把错误的理由写出来下，因为我水平不是很好呀谢谢了
你的英语底子还蛮好的,但有个别地方我觉得还值得商榷一下.1.我不知道这篇文章用在什么地方,但是我觉得第一句话完全可以不要.2.Maybe you will say heart or something else,but the correct answer is shoulder.这里最好这样写Maybe your answer is the heart or something else,but the correct answer,in my eyes,is the shoulder.3.A wide shoulder which your friends or relatives can cry on .这里并不是一句完整的话.which引导了一个修饰肩膀的定语从句.用强调句你觉得呢?It is a wide shoulder that your friends or relatives can cry on .4.David’s mother,a kind housewife,one day,she asked her son what the most important body part was in his mind.这里的she使得句子无端多了一个主语,所以不要she才是正确的.然后把one day放在her son后面.5.Her son said heart at once,she smiled and said nothing.最好把said换成answered\replied,然后在she之前加一个连接词and 或 then.6.Suddenly she asked her son the special question,David was shocked,and confused.He didn’t know why his mother asked this question again and again.He summoned the courage to ask her mother and knew the answer… 这里的表述有点混乱.你再多读几遍就会明白.7.The most important part is the shoulder,and sometimes everyone needs a shoulder to cry .用一般现在时就可以了 8.his mother hoped her son would have enough love and shoulders when he needed… 足够的肩膀?hoped 后面不能省that9.sympathetic是形容词,后面得接点什么
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Maybe you [could] say heart or something else [could]较适用。The most important part was shoulder, everyone needs用needs较好，因为只大多数情况。
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【纠错属性】我觉得应该专门给龙桃子改一个纠错贴，以免悲剧重复收藏
如果火星了随意删，但起码我觉得很有意义。。。2L开始
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换爪机继续，首先，KA死说明书第七页三个错误，均在第七页的最后一行最后一格里，胸口那两G1-6和G1-7个部件不在红色的G1板上，而在黄色的G3板的G3-6和G3-7上，舱盖部件中的A10在G1-10上。
别忘了地死的胸甲！！下午叫咱俩好找了半天！！！
这贴要沉了么？？？不能沉啊
这个我觉得挺好，标记
回复4楼：待会我得去看看地死说明书，大家别都光看啊，一起来纠错啊，为了我这个新手的未来！！！[大雾。。。]
这个我觉得挺好，标记
快吹气球浮起来
你？新手？2011年的压岁钱全被你拉坑里了
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帮顶，多纠正点啊，等咱回家也在说明书上标注下，省得到时候组的烦恼多多
不要光靠我啊，我才刚拼，还需要龙桃子支援队们的大力辅助啊
马克，最近在组双死
囧，火前留名
不了个是吧。。。这贴真要沉啊，别怪我太水，我才刚吧胸像组出来，实在是找不到更多印刷错误的地方啊，别沉啊拜托。。
睡觉前发个进度～～～～
Mark——昨天刚刚入了龙桃子卡死，帮你顶起来~~
怎么说呢= =说明书确实有几个地方错的 而且没小人 说明书也把小人写进去了.....ka死的大多数跟地死说明书一样(例如头部 胸...)然后我说句.......这贴意义不大...
= =.我学人家那句...
国产嘛.. 又不影响你...
好吧，等我整合完错误再一起发一次帖吧。，
组好了龙桃子的地狱死神 但是脚特别松 有啥解决办法吗
卡凖做短一点，卡槽做大一点
求签名出处
我也发一个，龙套子的卡死的走手臂外甲的内侧手肘位置要刮掉，那里多了一条突起的线，不然手肘会动不了的。
昨晚上我找个小人找半天…还专门开贴子问
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