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最新讲解：　　1. 语法能力
　　语法能力是所有口头和笔头考试的基础，也直接体现了学生语言能力基础。一般高中的语法知识就已经足够应付托福写作考试了。但高中语法学完了，很多同学还是对一些知识点模糊不清，比如定语，状语，分词结构，虚拟语态，独立主格…，这些术语只是为了方便教学和中国人的理解而设置的，模糊不清的原因也是在于高中阶段只要求学生在遇到各种语法现象的时候读懂文章做对题目即可，并不要求学生能自如应用到写作之中，这就产生了输入和输出的不平衡，所以根本更达不到读写的同步。
　　那么怎样加固语法概念的理解并应用自如呢呢?如果有较长的准备时间，建议从头至尾读完一本语法书，比如《英语语法手册》，《牛津实用英语语法》或者《分析英语语法》都可以，这些网上都有卖，也不需要死记硬背，读一遍就能帮助概念的形成。短期的话可以把老sat语法部分的考点作为蓝本，它包括了最简化最基础的语法知识点，并配合适量的套题练习，做题的过程就是培养语言表达的过程，同时有效加深正确语法的使用。当然最好同时配合阅读适当难度的原版书籍。
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托福满分作文的三大写作技巧
摘要: 托福考试中，托福写作是最考核考生英语水平及能力的部分。在托福写作部分拿下高分已然不易，写一篇托福满分作文着实不易。但是，考生掌握了扎实的基础，在辅以一定的写作技巧，托福满分作文也触手可得。 要在托福写 ...
托福考试中，托福写作是最考核考生英语水平及能力的部分。在托福写作部分拿下高分已然不易，写一篇托福满分作文着实不易。但是，考生掌握了扎实的基础，在辅以一定的写作技巧，托福满分作文也触手可得。
要在托福写作中拿到满分，考生老老实实的拿基础去拼是不行的。对于基础较好的考生来说，此时，技巧才是利剑。那么，如何写一篇托福满分作文呢？
1、压缩审题时间
对于写作部分，一般考生都会花个好几分钟来仔细审题，做个构思。但是，托福考试的独立写作，实际上相当于是开卷考试了。首先题库公开，它的题型和题材都不会超出题库的范围，考生可以在题库中找到类似的题目，加之机经的强大力量，使得托福独立写作真的成了开卷考试。既然是开卷考试，那么考生在平时的备考中，就应练一练各类型的写作题，使自己对任何一种考试话题都很熟悉，这样在考试过程中，考生就能压缩一下审题时间，尽量在1分钟内完成。那些完成不熟悉的话题，一下子考生是很难写出满分的作文的。满分不是临场发挥出来的，而是准备出来的，机会总是留给有准备的人。
2、提炼自己的模板
考生平时会练习很多写作，从中提炼自己的写作模板，那么在真正考试中，作文不过是信手拈来。假设你的文章字数是500字，那么你大概要写50至60个句子。把这50至60个句子，排成编号，从第1个到第50个，也就是从文章的第一句话到最后一句话，你都知道要写什么，并且知道怎么写，甚至每个句子你都掌握了2～3个漂亮的句式，这样你还担心自己拿不到高分吗？考生有一个自己的模板，能更迅速的在托福写作中完成一篇0瑕疵的作文。
3、压缩题库
托福写作的题库中，有185个题目，考生针对每一个题目准备一篇范文是不可能的。对此，考生可以压缩题库，将工作量缩小。压缩题库，考生可以通过将题目分类，对每一类题目一一思考，并动手写一写；或者将题库中可以互相转化的文章放弃，只通过一篇练习便可。简单来说，对每一类作文，考生都必须联系过，接触过，研究过，那么才能在考试中处变不惊。
总之，一篇托福写作满分不是依靠机遇的，而是完全凭借考生充足的准备。扎实的基础加上充分的准备，那才配得上是满分作文的眷顾。点题班火热报名中，加QQ群讨论答疑注意：今日放出写作机经，加群获取口语机经考满分网2015年10月10、11日托福写作机经First Priority (一级重点) 单一解释Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should supportartists (musicians, filmmakers and painters). Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Governments have done enough toeducate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? It is better for college students to takemany courses in one semester than it is for them to just take three or four coursesin one semester? Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? People should not spend muchtime on communicating through social media or with text messages. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? Workers would be more satisfied if theirjobs require them to do various kinds of work instead of making them do thesame thing all day long. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? Schools should use computers as a toolof education for children aged 4 to 7. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The more money people have, themore they should give away for charity. Do youagree or disagree with the statement？It is a waste of money for governments to fund space travel orspace exploration? 时代变迁Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? People now are more interested inimproving their neighborhood (the area that they live) that in the past.
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers are not appreciatedand valued like they were in the past. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? The personal and work-related challenges thatyoung people face today are not very different from the challenges that theirparents and grandparents faced when they were young. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? People 20 years from now willhave more leisure time (free time) than they do today. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years from now,students will not use printed books any more. Use specific reasons and examplesto support your answer. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The foods we eat today arehealthier than what we ate in the past. 缺一不可Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Cars (automobiles) have greatereffects on society than the airplanes do. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Political leaders have greaterinfluence on the society than artists. Somestudents prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous smallassignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined byonly a few large assignments. Which do you prefer and why? 三选一Intimes of an economic crisis, in which area should the government reduce itsspending? 1. Education 2. Health Care 3. Support for the unemployed Whichof the following is most important factor to you when you are making decisionson choosing a place for living?1. Livingin a place that is not expensive2. Livingclose to relatives3. Livingin an area with many shops and restaurants Ifyou're going to make a big purchase (such as, a car or a house...), explain howthe following three sources of information influence your decision. 1.Recommendations from friends or colleagues.2.Recommendations from the media (for example, newspaper, TV,...)3.Recommendations from a salesperson in a store. （隐）含绝对词Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The most important thingspeople learn are from their families. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal ofeducation is to teach people how to educate themselves. Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality ofeducation in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? In order to help high schoolstudents learn the sense of responsibility, it is necessary to require them todo household work after school.
Second Wave (二级重点)单一解释Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges and universitiesshould do a better job for preparing their students for the job market. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? In order to attract goodstudents, a university should spend a lot of money funding social activities. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is toocomplex to be handled by individuals.
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? People today do not rely ongovernments’ help, for they can solve important problems by themselves or withthe help of their family members. If acity has given some money to make an investment, which one of the followingplan do you support? 1.Build a public garde 2.Build a sports field in a high school which doesn't have its own. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Drivers should pay a certainamount of fees to drive in cities during rush hours. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? People living in small villages are more satisfiedwith their life than those who live in cities. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement？The government shouldsupport scientific research that does not have any practical use. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? There is no reason to beimpolite (rude) to others.
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Students would receive abetter, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying inschool. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to makepeople's lives simpler often turns out to make them more complicated. If youneed to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, would youchoose to use e-mail or text messages or to use the telephone calls or voicemessages?
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? An effective leader should beable to make others feel they have been part of a decision making process. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know what ishappening around the world, even if it does not affect your personal lives. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? To truly enjoy avacation (holiday), peopleshould leave their mobile phones at home.
Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? Competition between friends always has a negativeeffect on their friendship. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? Parents should allow children to make mistakesand let them learn from their own mistakes. Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how welltheir students perform. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Scientists should be heldaccount for the negative consequences associated with their discoveries andinventions. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should express theirdisagreement to teachers if they find that the teaching method is not correct. 三选一Schooladministrators are planning to make one of the following courses a requiredcourse. Which one do you think is the best choice? 1.
Personal finance management3.
Auto repairing Ifyour teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do?1. Interruptyour teacher right away2. Keepsilent3. Correctyour teacher after class.
（隐）含绝对词Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax andreduce stress is to spend time alone. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? We should state our honestopinions even though we know that other people may disagree with them. Some people think theextra-curriculum school work and activities should be decided by studentsthemselves, while others believe that these activities should be decided byparents and teachers. What is your opinion and why? Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? In order for a business to be successful, it mustput much money into advertising. 缺一不可Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? The most important task of auniversity professor is to educate students but not to do research. Somepeople claim that using cleaner energy to protect the environment is important,while others suggest that using traditional energy sources such as coal and oilis less expensive, what do you think of their opinions? Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for thegovernment to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic ortraditional buildings and homes. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Telephone has more effect onpeople’s life than television does. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? To be successful in a new job,the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important thanexcellent knowledge of this job. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Schools should be more focusedon improving facilities (libraries, computers, or labs) for students than onhiring famous teachers. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about publicrecognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, publicrecognition can still make people work harder. 变量型Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have awell-paid job which is easy to lose than it is to have a stable job whichoffers a low salary. Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made inyour own country are more interesting comparing to movies and programs made inother countries. 时代变迁Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? It is easier to maintain good health nowadaysthan it was in the past Do you agree or disagreewith the following statement? Today advertising today is less honest than itwas in the past, for that reason it is less useful for people to choose whatthey want to buy. 点击“阅读原文”，查看考满分网精彩课程点题班火热报名中，加群讨论答疑注意：今日放出写作机经，明日放出口语机经　
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Live，don’t just survive!2014年，有超过8万人在英国留学。而我，也意外成为其中一员都说仁者见仁，智者见智。Frasier, The Wire, Homeland等等神剧你找到了吗？本文转载整理自 TOEFL托福备考版权属于原作者 若有侵权请告知删除！小编给大家准备的100条“万能句型”和2016 U.S NEWS世界大学排名TOP100本文系《留学》杂志原创，欢迎朋友圈转发。转载请联系微信：rfacebook 告诉新人的四点建议本文系《留学》杂志整理，媒体转载请联系rubyme。今天，跟大家分享一篇各种小道儿消息-ETS官方来袭，答疑2016年GRE考试新趋势~考满分各种大奖，你抽中了吗？挣扎着不关机的人，终究会明白，关机之后才是真正的生活。那些不再被信息、不再被别人影响和打扰的生活，才属于自己今天是12月23日。2015年所有托福考试已经结束，距离2016年托福1月9日第一场托福考试还有17天...视频内容：理性与兽性视频时长：5分钟如果你也被这样的托福问题所困惑：1、为什么自己的阅读和听力在老师的指导下和自己勤奋的日夜刷题的题海战术中不断考满分冬季招聘第一弹12月18日迎来了2015年最后一场GRE考试，最后一场考试考情如何，持续关注G考的小编已然也迫不及待要分享19、20真题回忆及命中汇报优秀是一种习惯，命中是一种常态。在刚刚结束的19、20日考试中，考满分网点题班再考满分网，用科技解决备考难题本文转载整理自 豆瓣小组版权属于原作者 若有侵虽然二线城市比一线城市竞争压力小一些，但面对个人所需的筹码是一致的。因为在一线城市呆不下去，所以退居二线——、20日托福写作考题预测1First Priority 一级重点单一解释Some peo针对12月5日,12日,13日考试的考满分口语、写作机经预测出炉，希望大家多进行参考学习。考满分网点题班，业12月，已经到了美国各大高校2016年秋季入学研究生申请的高峰期。部分学校的申请也将在12月份截止。那201国外一个插画家Kelly养了一只叫Jay的狗狗，当与他分别的那一天来临时，Kelly用画记录下了他曾经的点滴---------惊喜从这里开始-------?陪伴我三个月从雅思到美剧从托福到文书帅照已经见过尼玛君只好鞠作为一个苦逼的上班族，基本上这就是我们面对滴生活。。。新员工刚入职工会主席财务部主任部门领导领导秘书头儿交待---------惊喜从这里开始-------?陪伴我三个月从雅思到美剧从托福到文书帅照已经见过尼玛君只好鞠人生最大的成本，就是在错误的人际圈里，不知不觉耗尽一生，碌碌无为度过一生!人生最大的喜悦就是：偶遇，遇见在刚刚结束的12日和13日两场考试中，考满分网点题班机经又中原题啦！有图有真相！以下为各学科命中情况：12月一个女人魅力的养成不在于养尊处优什么都不做，而是去做一些有意义的事情，同时学会管理好自己的家庭、职业、兴以下是一张最近热传的图，告诉你2016年你应该处于什么状态，四格的内容分别是：出生年份、年龄、孩子应该几岁、美国的一个很出名的博主Steve Pavlina三个学期就修完了两个大学学位，以GPA3.9的成绩毕业并且获、13日托福写作考题预测1First Priority 一级重点单一解释Do you a12月初GMAT的考试成绩出来后，考满分的群里再次沸腾起来，不少同学在亮出自己优异成绩的同时，也对考满分大加留学分为生存需求、兴趣需求和自我实现需求三类。虽然心思重的家长多考虑生存和发展，但唯有实现自我，才是留学真正导读男人和女人真是来自不同地球的生物啊，女人所期待的并不是你的某一个答案，而是你面对这个问题的所有表现是否令2016年托福考试日期15年就要过去了，无论你是赶着16秋季出国的老生，还是准备17留洋的新人，都应该将下面“因为有了因为，所以有了所以，既然已成既然，何必再说何必？”忘记你所失去的，珍惜你所拥有的，未来的命运外企工作邮件100句1. I am writing to confirm/enquire/inform yo〈日星期一〉提笔写这篇的时候，托福已经告一段落了，感觉自己就像是放下了一个重担一样。由于这考满分网点题班与其他点题班最大区别之一：点题组精准预测+子睿老师原创思路。不走“小范围”装X然并卵路线，覆盖面广，不玩儿综合机经，内容实用而集中。导读近日，在香港的大学校园里，有关香港与大陆关系的争辩又有发生。当"香港不是中国"的声音再次出现，那些在港读很多人出国留学后，都会有一个很美好的愿景：顺利完成学业，在国外找到一份满意的工作，然后迎娶白富美，从此走向人bj-kmf关注考满分，每天一小时免费公开课，教你玩转留学，英语考试不用愁！热门文章最新文章bj-kmf关注考满分，每天一小时免费公开课，教你玩转留学，英语考试不用愁！　　写一篇托福作文就如同做一盘菜，如何要将其做的色香味俱全，就靠厨子的功夫了。参考北京新东方戴云老师提出的三个“万能理由”：Career&&preparation/increase&knowledge/new&&experiences以及分为10类的““万金油”
【出国留学网 - 托福作文】托福考试：托福写作的三个“万能理由”妙用
　　写一篇就如同做一盘菜，如何要将其做的色香味俱全，就靠厨子的功夫了。参考新东方戴云老师提出的三个&万能理由&：Career
preparation/increase knowledge/new
experiences以及分为10类的&&万金油&&：健康和安全、便利、经济、交流、幸福和情感、成功、环保、品格、科技、教育与培训、国与文明，这十类几乎涵盖了我们在进行文章论述时所能涉及的全部范围。所以如果能够将这些&&万金油&&用好，用熟，就能达到事半功倍的效果。
　　&&万金油&&是油，要用，还要活用
　　在时，首先是紧。要在半小时内完成400字左右的文章;其次，在很短时间内要根据题目想出几条支持自己论点的理由，并将其有序地组织起来，构成文章，而且还要做到语言地道。所以考生很容易手忙脚乱。所以为了避免这种情况的发生，让考生在短时间内完成一篇高质量的文章，把这盘菜做好，就需要&万金油&出场了。
　　要做菜，油是必不可少的。同样，在托福作文中，也一定会用到&&万金油&&。用的时候切忌生搬硬套，要灵活运用。
　　在有限的时间内，在确立了我们要写的中心论点之后，就要想出几个分论点，这时可以通过&万金油&来帮助我们节省时间，迅速定位，快速进入写作状态。
　　比如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people
are putting too much emphasis on appearance and fashion. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.
　　解这道题目，首先从自己出发，怎么好写，怎么容易写，去确定自己的中心论点。从disagree
的角度出发，要从哪几个分论点去论述人们并没有对外表和时尚putting too much emphasis 呢?
　　考生在现场可能会抓耳挠腮，一时不知从何下手，这时我们可以借助戴云老师的10个分类&万金油&去一一验证。
　　首先，可以从适用范围最广的三个万能理由去分析可行不可行：Career preparation/increase knowledge/new
experiences。
　　对时尚外表的可以帮助我们的Career preparation&&事业成功吗?&&成功 ，也就是十类中的&成功&。
　　答案是可以!注重外表，关注时尚反映一个人的品味，个人气质会提升，进而引起人们的关注，这自然会为自己带来意想不到的工作机会，进而发展自己的事业。你可以举例，XX就是因为平常对时尚的关注，注重外表，气质好，给人印象深刻，而在中脱颖而出，成功地得到一份好的工作。
　　接下来从其他十个分类中，进行快速定位，寻找分论点。国家与文明，国家的范畴很大，可以展开论述。就其中的公益和慈善方面，可以举例。由于人们以时尚的关注，还能帮助他人，比如最近的&犀利哥事件&，从一个普通的流浪乞丐，因为其与众不同的穿着打扮，引起人们的关注，进而帮助他与家人团聚，唤起了人们对弱势群体的关注，进而促进了社会和谐。
　　第三个&健康和安全&也能用，可以说人们对时尚外表的关注，自然会崇尚健康的护肤产品，保养品，要注意保持身材，就会关注健身，要穿用对人们身体好的布料做的衣服，进而提高了人的身体健康。
　　第四个，经济。人们关注外表和时尚，就会进行大量消费，可以用一组数据来，时尚业对经济的贡献。消费刺激市场，进而推动经济发展。
　　第五个，幸福和情感。现代生活的压力越来越大，人们希望可以放松身心，对时尚和外表的关注，可以让人们的身心得到愉悦，缓解工作中的压力。人们只是借助时尚来放松娱乐自己，使自己的生活更加精彩，并不是put
too much emphasis。
　　通过分析这道题目，我们可以看出&万金油&真的可以在托福作文中助我们一臂之力，在紧张的考场中，只要脑中有了&万金油&，就不愁找不到论点。但我们要把它用好，用对，否则会达到反效果。一定要用具体例子来辅助它，这样才可以使&做的饭菜更香&。原文来源：
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