英语大神进!急~这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~My Big FamilyDo you like your family?Most people will say“Of course”.Your family will make you happy when you feel upset.So is my family.It’s really big but warm enough.There are eight people in my family. I’m glad to let you know them.My grandfather is a brave political instructor before.He left many scars from the army.He has dug in many caves.When he told me these things,he always smiled.Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists.He wrote an article about this cave and sent it to the company.He also have the studens all over the China.Some of them usually call him up.And some of them usually visit him.He is popular before,isn’t he?My grandma cooks very well.Her education isn’t very good but she is a really good grandma.She
quitted her job to look after me when I was very young.I thaked her a lot.My father is a fireman before.But now,he is a officer.He becomes fatter and fatter.So,he persist in playing badminton with his colleagues twice a week.He is thinner now.But he likes to eat sweets,especially candy flass.When I remind him not to eat sweet so much.Of course,it goes in one ear and out the other.How about my mother?She is proud to draw or paint a beautiful picture.She does well in handicraft.I have to admit her talent.But she isn’t rational when she is shopping!She buy a lot of coat and shoes.My aunt is a kind woman.She usually shopping with my mother.She is my father’s sister.She usually give me presents.She is very fashionable.She has almost been to all the cake shops.Isn’t that crazy?My uncle is a humorous person.He is my aunt’s husband. He is not only a elder ,but also a friend.We usually talked on phone before he became my uncle.He is good at computer.So,he usually tells me the most popular large games.The last one is my cousin.He is my aunt’s son.He is only 5 years old now.But he is infatuated with cartoons and toy cars.He has more than one hundred toy cars in different sizes and colors.He likes to watch me playing computer games,too.I have to play games about spiderman or superman everyday.He usually fights with my father .That’s inevitable because he was born in the year of chicken.And my father was born in the year of dog.We eat dinner together almost every night.Do you like my family?
1,He left many scars from the army.是说为战争留下伤痕.改成 he has got scars from the army. ,2,Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists要用被动,洞是被开放的,用完成时比较好,强调影响.改成 one of the caves he dug has been open to the tourists3,He also have the studens all over the China.Some of them usually call him up.And some of them usually visit him.He is popular before,isn’t he? studens 拼写错误,检查一下看别的地方是否都写正确了.4,he persist 改成
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she recieved lower education.6,She is proud to draw or paint a beautiful picture改成 She is fond of drawing or painting
a beautiful picture7,She usually shopping with my mother改成
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go shopping with my mother.8,He is not only a elder 改成
an elder9,he usually tells me the most popular large games改成 tell me how to play the most .10,I have to play games about spiderman or superman everyday.改成
I love playing games about.,基本上挺好的,你这样的年龄能写出这样的文章已经很不错了,加油!文章中一些拼写和基本语法,按照我改写的再检查检查,祝好运、成功!
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Produced in Zhaoqing, Guangdong Province in South China, the Duan inkstone is one of the four most famous inkstones in China along with the She inkstone in Anhui Province, the Tao inkstone in Gansu Province, and the Chengni inkstone in Shanxi Province.The Duan Ink Stone originated in the BaiShi and Ribing villages, in the city of Shiqing in Guangong Province. Baishi and Ribing are neighboring villages, and for centuries, up to 80 percent of the villagers earned their living by making Duan ink stones. Presently, it is still the central region for Duan ink stone production.According to documents, Duan inkstones were first produced during the Wude reign (618-626) of the Tang Dynasty (618-907). It is made of Duan stone from the Duanxi River running at the foot of Mount Lanke, hence the name. Famed as being fine and doing no damages to the brush, the, Duan inkstone has had a high reputation among Chinese scholars ever since.Making Duan inkstones includes four steps: stone selection, engraving and box-matching, among which stone selection and engraving are the two most important steps. It is very hard to hand pick flawless stones, and using tools such as dynamite is forbidden. Engraving encompasses good conception, and highlights the fine shape of the stones and engraving skills.Flying dragons, flowers and birds, figures, mountains and waters are common images engraved on the stones. . The matching boxes are also very carefully chosen and are often made of purple sandalwood, and rosewood.The Duan inkstone has various styles, and new-style products are designed one after another, such as the Doufang inkstone, the engraved rectangular inkstone and the engraved natural inkstone. In recent years, many products were made to meet increased export demand.According to existing records, people started making Duan ink stones in the Tang Dynasty. It has a fabricated flow, it protects the brush, and it almost never freezes, even when placed in low temperatures. . The industry flourished nationwide in the mid-Tang Dynasty. Throughout hundreds of years, villagers have developed a scientific production system. The process is rather complicated, which encompasses stone selection, material screening, shape designing, carving, and wooden box matching and polishing. The end result must be very delicate, so every stage of the process must be done by hand.The key to making Duan ink stones is collecting the proper stones. . The cave is about 80 cm high, and collectors have to squat, sit or lie down to collect the stone. Because of the requirements of the environment, the tools for stone collecting have to be specially made.Like other traditional handicraft industries, the Duan ink making industry has its own organization and rituals. The Duan ink makers worship Wuding and hold a grand ceremony to worship him on April eighth of the lunar calendar every year.The Duan ink stone is highly valued for its artistic aesthetics and its special selection procedures.. In modern society, the traditional industry is becoming more mechanized. Fewer and fewer people are interested in inheriting this skill. We need to understand the obstacles and make efforts to remove them if we hope to preserve this culture.
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Duan Inkstone, named as per its origin at DuanZhou, ZhaoQing, is the first inkstone of the top four China inkstone.It is a traditional handmake artwork, with its history can be traced back to 130...
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