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the three of them was excited. 把 the three of them 作为一个整体吧
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It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.Some people may stay one place for a long time. We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want,digital equipments are usually harm to people`s eye.
Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can use computer in our working day,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.Such as.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,there still exist some problems for us to do.
But,we need have good habits to relax ourself,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card that we can read more books which we want,tooAs we all know.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.So .All kinds of these things we can meet in our life
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It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.Some people may stay(加上at) one place for a long time. We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere(everywhere - every place) which we want,digital equipments are usually harm (harm - harmful)to people`s eye(eye - eyes).
Many people own their equipments for their are(are去掉) convenience.We can use computer in our working day,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.Such as.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,there still exist some problems for us to do.
But,we need have good habits to relax ourself(ourself - ourselves),we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card（加上so） that we can read more books which we want,tooAs we all know.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.All kinds of these things we can meet（all kinds of these things放在这） in our life.So
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Digital equipments are getting more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere.
Many people own their equipments for their convenience. We can have our own digital camera to record our happy moment in our daily life. We can also read the digital books in our learning. For example, we don`t need to carry a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card. We can then read more books when we want. We can use computer in our working day too.It is fast for workers to exchange their information
and to send information to a far place.
However, there are still some problems exist for us to tak...
As we all know that digital equipments are more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products which we want everywhere.
Their equipments for are convenient.We use our own digital cameras to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books for learning.For example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments usually do h...
We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere that
we want.Many people own their equipments for their are convenient.嘿嘿
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热心网友英语短文改错求助大家火速帮忙,谢谢basketball is popular with young students at school, these days we are exciting about the basketball matches between the classes in their grade, we have chosen our plays careful and practised a lot of after school every day, we also had organized our cheer team, prepare dances and slogans to cheer ourselves up, in short, we have done many things for the matches, though we don't have good player and we are not quite skillful, we all believe that we can cooperate well but win , whatever the result it is, the most important thing are that we are working hard and enjoying ourselves, we are looking forward the coming matches
Basketball is popular among young students at school.These days we are excited about the basketball matches among classes o we have chosen our players carefully and practiced a lot after school.We also have organized our cheering teem and prepared dances and slogans to cheer for the players.In short,we have done many things for the matches.Even though we don't have good players and we are not very skillful,we all believe that we can cooperate well and win.The most important thing is that we work hard and enjoy ourselves,whatever the result is.We really look forward to the upcoming matches.主要错误是标点,改用句号和分号的时候用成了逗号,导致意思混乱.其他修改请对比原文和修改后的文章.
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是你自己写的吗？为什么搞这么多完成时，过去式就可以了，完成时用的不好反而不对。我觉得我还是给你改成过去式吧。还有一些其他错误，你可以百度hi加我，我一个个和你说，争取写出更好的文章
exciting--excitedgrade--gradescareful--carefully
扫描下载二维码2道英语改错题 需解释 谢谢！, 2道英语改错题 需解释 谢谢！ 2
2道英语改错题 需解释 谢谢！ 2.What time is it on your watch.Not only the students but also their teacher like collecting stamps1?将on改为by这个是固定搭配还是啥的. 将like改为likes为什么要用likes lkx-13 2道英语改错题 需解释 谢谢！
没有这种问法，like要追随teacher的谓语2 on your watch 指在表的表面上1 not only
but also是就近原则，by your watch是固定这么问的 如果有疑问欢迎追加
。，如果对你有所帮助。but also 是从后原则
but also 后面是teacher 是单数 所以谓语动词要加s是固定搭配
必须用by有不会的再问not only
第一个是因为是第三人称}