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Universirty should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
With the ever-changing society, some people argued that universities should accept same numbers of male and female students in each subject. In other words,&&as men and women hace the same right and responsibility in society, the number of men and women, who take a course in university, should be equal. Personally, I belive this opinion is true to some extent,&&but it is better to consider this in much more thorough way.
It is widely accepted that if a student want to sutdy in university, what he needs to do is to pass the university entrance examination. It is the grade, not the gender, that decides if a person can study in university. In this situation, university can not promise that the number of male and female students is equal in each university course. If university wants to keep the number equal, then the university entrance system should change in many ways. It seems unreasonable, because the university entrance system used now is the experience of many generations, and it still practises well.
Besides, different students have different talents. For instance, some students are talent in color and imagination, then they are more situable to learn arts. While others are goodat logical thinking, then they might learn science well. If we made a student who is good at color and imagination learn science, the result would be a disaster. According to some scientifis reports, men are more rational, while women are more sensitive. So it would be easier for me to learn some science course, such as physics and so on. Therefore, it would be a wise choice for university to take more male students than female students in science course.
In the long run, university should accept students who have talents in some particular subject. As a result, more and more elites will contribute to our society. In my opinion, it is better for university not to take the same number of male and famale students in each subject.
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With the ever-changing society, some people argued that universities should accept same numbers of male and female students in each subject. In other words,&&as men and women hace[笔误] the same right and responsibility in society, the number of men and women, who take a course in university, should be equal. Personally, I belive[笔误] this opinion is true to some extent,&&but it is better to consider this in much more thorough way.
It is widely accepted that if a student want to[主谓单复一致] sutdy [笔误] in university, what he needs to do is to pass the university entrance examination. It is the grade, not the gender, that decides if a person can study in university. [中式英语] In this situation, university can not promise that the number of male and female students is equal in each university course. If university wants to keep the number equal, then the university entrance system should change in many ways. It seems unreasonable, because the university entrance system used now is the experience of many generations, and it still practises well.[本段论证貌似偏题，题目是问数量相等是否同意。而不是问数量不能相等的原因。]
Besides, different students have different talents. For instance, some students are talent in color and imagination, then they are more situable[笔误] to learn arts. While others are goodat [笔误] logical thinking, then they might learn science well. If we made a student who is good at color and imagination learn science, the result would be a disaster. According to some scientifis [笔误] reports, men are more rational, while women are more sensitive. So it would be easier for me [不要拿自己做例子] to learn some science course, such as physics and so on. Therefore, it would be a wise choice for university to take more male students than female students in science course.[论据又有点扯远了]
In the long run, university should accept students who have talents in some particular subject. As a result, more and more elites will contribute to our society. In my opinion, it is better for university not to take the same number of male and famale[笔误] students in each subject.
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一位资深报人从香港启程经深圳到武汉出席一个重要会议。
　　那一天，他在香港办理出境手续时，非常顺利。手续完毕，那个穿着制服的香港人很有礼貌地把证件整理好，然后从大玻璃后面——用双手递出来——还给他，并且还说了声：“谢谢。” 这位资深报人感到很受用，心情舒畅地踏上旅途。
　　在深圳办理入境手续时，这位报人双手把自己的证件递进大玻璃，同样，手续很快办理完毕，不过，那个穿制服的深圳人把证件还给他的时候，不是递出来，而是丢出来，并且很急切地说：“下一位！” 这位资深报人收拾好证件，稍微犹疑了一下，隐隐地怀念在香港时的感觉。
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